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I like animals very much. Animals are very cute, so they heal me. The healing effect of animal is really accepted medically. I want to touch pretty animals if I see them. I

especially like cats, dogs, and rabbits. They are very lovely. I have kept a dog and a rabbit,

and I am keeping a cat now. I will introduce them.

I kept a dog when I was a kindergartner. The dog’s kind was Japanese midget Shiba.

I called him “Muku”. I really wanted to keep a dog because I love dogs. My parents bought

him, so I was very happy, and I took him out alternately. It was very fun to take a

walk with him. He became very strong in power as he grew up. So I left his care to my father. He

heard what I said. When I said “Sit.”, he sat. I took good care of him very much, because I

loved him. He got old, and suffered from a disease. He died of ill when I was a high school

student. I was very sad and cried. My parents took him to the cemetery for dead pets. This

was my frst time to see the death of the animal with my own eyes. I think that he lives

happily in heaven.

I also kept a rabbit when I was a pupil. I decided to keep a rabbit because a lot of

rabbits were born in the elementary school. The rabbit was very little and cute. I called

her “Miffy”. I took good care of her, too. I sent her from the hut and played in the garden. I

like it very much because she ran around happily. She liked carrots and cabbages. I gave

her them every day. Her expression was very cute. She went to heaven when I was a junior

high school student. I cried very much. I held a funeral for her at the cemetery. I knew the

serious matter of the life again.

Now, I am keeping a cat in my house. He came to my house when I was thirteen years

old. My brother really wanted to keep a cat. I went to the pet shop with my mother and

brother. I found him there, and I thought “What a cute cat!” We decided to keep him on

the day. His kind is American short hair. Black and gray striped pattern are very pretty. He

likes to sleep on my knee. His sleeping face is very cute. My friends often say “You look

like a cat.” I’m very glad to say so because I love cats.

I want to keep a dog again. I want to keep a dog which kind of Cavalier or American

Cocker Spaniel. Of course I will take care with love. It is very important to take a

communication with love. Pleasant memories increase by doing so. We know preciousness

of the life by keeping animals. Recently, there is a person who is throwing away their pet. I

can’t believe it. I want everyone to keep animals with responsibility. I’m very happy to

spend with animals, so I love animals. (523/11651words)